Rave

[SuperFlyWhiteGuy]

Rave


Dance baby dance.
Let the sweat pour.
Move those hips like you've never moved them before.
Grind up against me,
Like we've been stripped of our clothes.

The beat is like our hearts,
Beating harder and faster.
The ever-changing lights tell us
That we are in a wonderful place
Full of wonderful feelings.

Feel me move in
And press my lips against your neck.
You moan but no one can hear.
The beat is my rythm,
You are my motivation.

I can do this all night baby,
Can you handle it?
Of course you can,
You are you.
You're nonstop.

So look into my eyes darling,
Now kiss my lips.
You taste so good.
I love the feel of your hips,
And your hands on my chest.

But lets not get carried away baby,
Even though I would love to indulge in your ectasy.
Lets keep this momentum going,
Lets keep this emotion flowing.
Lets Rave

[ilf21]

It's nice WOM.

But couldn't you have written something different other then raves?

[SuperFlyWhiteGuy]

Signora said:

It's nice WOM.

But couldn't you have written something different other then raves?

I suppose you could write this about a R&B dance or hip hop dance or something. I based it on personal experience though.

[Mickey Martini]

Rave is the only comtemporary music I can stomach. Great poem as usual WOM

[ilf21]

Mickey said:

Rave is the only comtemporary music I can stomach. Great poem as usual WOM

Rave is regurgitated 'beats' that make me wanna hurl and stab a sharp pencil through my ears.